Woah I had a breakthrough today on #writing
I read my various #poetry #stories , and work to my stepmother.
Like my mum, she said the potential was there and I had to keep on working. Then I read her my last #poem which I was not satisfied of. The form is there, but something was lacking and I couldn't say what. My mum told me I was just being a perfectionnist. My stepmom told me my previous texts were good but were structured by a background #story that was lacking there #writer #artist